LOL. I usually wait to reply to comments until I can reply to them all in order so no one feels sleighted, but LOL, your comment about Jared's pants... yeah, I totally described them more than I should have because I decided during the scene at the diner what he was wearing, and then I made a note to go back and add it in there. I may have done it more than once. I kept wishing I had the ability to draw, because I'm sure Jared's designs just sound ridiculous when I describe them, but in my head they're pretty awesome. Ah, that I was a fashion designer.
I'll check that part with Chris in part 8, because yeah, I changed that after beta because I was of half a mind to have Jared fire Jeffrey, so I changed a bunch of other things, then I decided Jared wouldn't fire his only friend, and went back and changed it all again. It's very possible that makes no sense at all now.
Thanks so much for sticking with it til the end. I was terrified of posting cheesetastic Rom Com, but it was so much fun to write. *glomps you*
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Date: 2010-01-03 01:26 pm (UTC)I'll check that part with Chris in part 8, because yeah, I changed that after beta because I was of half a mind to have Jared fire Jeffrey, so I changed a bunch of other things, then I decided Jared wouldn't fire his only friend, and went back and changed it all again. It's very possible that makes no sense at all now.
Thanks so much for sticking with it til the end. I was terrified of posting cheesetastic Rom Com, but it was so much fun to write. *glomps you*