I just read chapter 1. I usually don't comment until I've finished something, but I have to work now and won't be able to read the rest until later. And I have to say something now, even if it's a semi-coherent Wow!
This is gorgeous--language, structure, characterization, everything. Visceral, laugh out loud funny in places. And the way Sam sees Dean--and the way you express it--just floors me.
I will finish this later and I will try to comment in detail then, but for now, I repeat: WOW!
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Date: 2008-07-31 06:10 pm (UTC)This is gorgeous--language, structure, characterization, everything. Visceral, laugh out loud funny in places. And the way Sam sees Dean--and the way you express it--just floors me.
I will finish this later and I will try to comment in detail then, but for now, I repeat: WOW!