Okay, okay, I won't argue anymore! :D I accept your rightness. The scene changes are random, they go very quickly from kinda funny to kinda heartbreaking. But, hey, hopefully people will be able to follow it without getting too pissed off at me!
Alternating POVs are good! I can follow the changes, so most likely everyone else'll be able to LOL.
Hrrrrrrm, I'm not sure when I'll be posting. I'm anticipating the story being about ten chapters long, and thus far I've written five. I might post the first chapter to my journal next week, just to see how people react to it!
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Date: 2007-08-03 03:55 pm (UTC)The scene changes are random, they go very quickly from kinda funny to kinda heartbreaking. But, hey, hopefully people will be able to follow it without getting too pissed off at me!
Alternating POVs are good! I can follow the changes, so most likely everyone else'll be able to LOL.
Hrrrrrrm, I'm not sure when I'll be posting. I'm anticipating the story being about ten chapters long, and thus far I've written five. I might post the first chapter to my journal next week, just to see how people react to it!