wow. i really loved this! jared! omg jared just accepting and trying to make things work (laundry and feeding kids) and then finding he's inspired by those pants and then completely believing that he *was* an artist (because jensen said so), was so perfectly described. the fantastic family and crazy pressures in jensen's life, just, all the details, were so well done!
i didn't want this story to end! the romantic garage scene! that was so awesome!
i don't want to add to any pressure and this story had a completely satisfactory and beautiful conclusion, but i have to add my hopes that you will be inspired to write more in this verse! when stories are as well written as this one, i can't help wanting more!
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Date: 2010-02-27 06:42 am (UTC)i didn't want this story to end! the romantic garage scene! that was so awesome!
i don't want to add to any pressure and this story had a completely satisfactory and beautiful conclusion, but i have to add my hopes that you will be inspired to write more in this verse! when stories are as well written as this one, i can't help wanting more!
thank you so much!!