I love Indy, too. I wish I could've found more ways to incorporate him into the latter parts of the story. He seemed perfect as an instrument of chaos at the beginning, but as things come into order, he kinda disappears. Maybe I need to fix that. *ponders*
Psst. Next two parts are unlocked. And I hope I didn't miss any huge typos in your parts. In going over this, I'm surprised how much I've still managed to miss after all the months staring at it. :P
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Date: 2009-12-30 10:02 am (UTC)Psst. Next two parts are unlocked. And I hope I didn't miss any huge typos in your parts. In going over this, I'm surprised how much I've still managed to miss after all the months staring at it. :P