I was going to argue that the fact that the story is going no where is beside the point, but then I had to concede as it's awfully hard to read through closed eyes!!! Hee!
As I suspected...better with each chapter. Also, I agree that you killed off the right one, just...you know...dead Jared *flails* ;) This story is just so awesome, beautifully written and just the perfect mix of humor and sadness.
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Date: 2007-08-05 03:18 pm (UTC)I was going to argue that the fact that the story is going no where is beside the point, but then I had to concede as it's awfully hard to read through closed eyes!!! Hee!
As I suspected...better with each chapter. Also, I agree that you killed off the right one, just...you know...dead Jared *flails* ;) This story is just so awesome, beautifully written and just the perfect mix of humor and sadness.