Girl, I don't think you have any idea how much your reviews mean to me. Not only am I highly respectful of your writing, (can't read 'em all, just cuz, guh, so much going, but I try to drop a line when I do), but the way you latch onto exactly what I was trying to say makes me feel like I'm doing something right.
Thank you, thank you.
As for Donna, well, I was thinking she'd have to be there, Jared's family was probably too wrapped up in their own grief,so I just got it in my head that Donna was there for Jen. I had this image of someone who was just, uncomfortable, puttering nervously around the house. I didn't want her to be insensitive, but I think she's just so uncertain in that situation, that her nervous energy makes her completely unable to think or empathize.
Anyway, I didn't see them leaving Jen alone, so I figured he'd have to get pissed and throw her out, LOL. I know...*is embarrassed*
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Date: 2007-08-05 11:05 am (UTC)Thank you, thank you.
As for Donna, well, I was thinking she'd have to be there, Jared's family was probably too wrapped up in their own grief,so I just got it in my head that Donna was there for Jen. I had this image of someone who was just, uncomfortable, puttering nervously around the house. I didn't want her to be insensitive, but I think she's just so uncertain in that situation, that her nervous energy makes her completely unable to think or empathize.
Anyway, I didn't see them leaving Jen alone, so I figured he'd have to get pissed and throw her out, LOL. I know...*is embarrassed*
You make me grin so hard.