Yeah, I know...It's been beta'ed and everything, but I'm reading it over now, and the beta comments and thinking,...'this could be better.' Hopefully, by the end of the day. *crosses fingers*
Though, I gotta say, Chapter Four is a bridge chapter that builds into the big Chapter Five climax, so Chapter Three is probably the better of the two. IMHO.
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Date: 2007-07-30 02:26 pm (UTC)Though, I gotta say, Chapter Four is a bridge chapter that builds into the big Chapter Five climax, so Chapter Three is probably the better of the two. IMHO.