OMG you genius! I just want to fangurl you! Scream and cry! And just plain worship your mind! This was fucking brilliant and just OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
This turned me into some huge emotional and tension coiled person! Damn! *bows* Dude, you rock like no other.
Not only is your writing superb, utterly and just totally wonderful. But, this was fucking plot man. And it was so rich. My chest hurt it was so tight, waiting to se what emotion would come next for either of them, whether Jensen has a response or Jared wold tell hi inner-monologue to fuck off while he kicked it with Jensen and kicked Sandy to the curb.
The ending. Damn! Dude! Seeing the hank of yellowed hemp twisted around the elastic of the sock garter, Jared laughs with a shudder of relief and wastes no time raising Jensen’s leg to his mouth to undo the knot with his teeth.
As Jared tosses the hank of rope over his shoulder into the hands of some other horny bachelor, Jensen leans in for a kiss, drags Jared up to his feet, and whispers in his ear.
“Don’t forget. Next time, I’m tying you up.”
And Jared drags him out of the reception hall without bothering to wait for the receiving line or the limousine.
Who needs rice and champagne when you’ve got Jensen Ackles and a rope?
I usually never wish there was something more to a one-shot, just pleased that soemthing was that good, but I want to dwell in this some more, so I am gonna read it... again.
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Date: 2007-09-15 09:19 pm (UTC)This turned me into some huge emotional and tension coiled person! Damn!
*bows* Dude, you rock like no other.
Not only is your writing superb, utterly and just totally wonderful. But, this was fucking plot man. And it was so rich.
My chest hurt it was so tight, waiting to se what emotion would come next for either of them, whether Jensen has a response or Jared wold tell hi inner-monologue to fuck off while he kicked it with Jensen and kicked Sandy to the curb.
The ending. Damn! Dude!
Seeing the hank of yellowed hemp twisted around the elastic of the sock garter, Jared laughs with a shudder of relief and wastes no time raising Jensen’s leg to his mouth to undo the knot with his teeth.
As Jared tosses the hank of rope over his shoulder into the hands of some other horny bachelor, Jensen leans in for a kiss, drags Jared up to his feet, and whispers in his ear.
“Don’t forget. Next time, I’m tying you up.”
And Jared drags him out of the reception hall without bothering to wait for the receiving line or the limousine.
Who needs rice and champagne when you’ve got Jensen Ackles and a rope?
I usually never wish there was something more to a one-shot, just pleased that soemthing was that good, but I want to dwell in this some more, so I am gonna read it... again.
Awesome!!!!!