This was fuckin' awesome. Such a good read, seriously. I was supposed to be eating at the same time but I kept forgetting cause I didn't want to turn my eyes away long enough to actually get any food on my fork. Gotta point out, the one thing I did notice [and loved] multiple times was your use of similies and metaphors. Stuff like "he's as manageable as scuba gear in a kiddie pool passed out" had me giggling, but it didn't detract from the story either, so I wasn't thrown off from the plot. I think the word delicious covers it nicely. It was seriously just so much fun to read even as I was freaking out over Jensen and feeling the desperation along with them.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2007-09-15 03:46 pm (UTC)Pic