LOL! Well, ya know, I'm still expecting a little flack for Jared lookig like an ass. I really love the guy, and the last thing I want is to make him look bad. I tried to make him more confused and desperate, less selfish than in the first draft, but ya know, I dunno how to justify the fact that he'd have to be doing a little two-timing for any of this to be true. *grumble*
Glad you liked the little NC-17. That was for you. WAsn't exactly romantic, but hey, you ask, and I give. Sorry 'bout the ending though, I was feeling like I was treading water myself by the end of this one. *snicker*
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Date: 2007-09-14 10:05 pm (UTC)Glad you liked the little NC-17. That was for you. WAsn't exactly romantic, but hey, you ask, and I give. Sorry 'bout the ending though, I was feeling like I was treading water myself by the end of this one. *snicker*
Thanks darlin.