This is absolutely awesome - I love the addition of that whole first scene - the metaphor about the sinking birds, and the waves, and the treading water ...
I think I love all of the extras you've intricately woven into the fabric of the story. I liked this story the first time I read it but I seriously love it now ...
Oh yeah ... love it ...
And okay - so two timing Jared, not a fabulous guy, but yeah, he made the right decision in the end (I mean who wouldn't choose Jensen Ackles ... with or without rope?)
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Date: 2007-09-14 09:55 pm (UTC)This is absolutely awesome - I love the addition of that whole first scene - the metaphor about the sinking birds, and the waves, and the treading water ...
I think I love all of the extras you've intricately woven into the fabric of the story. I liked this story the first time I read it but I seriously love it now ...
Oh yeah ... love it ...
And okay - so two timing Jared, not a fabulous guy, but yeah, he made the right decision in the end (I mean who wouldn't choose Jensen Ackles ... with or without rope?)
Oh yeah ...