This was so intriguing! Loved the way you kept us guessing about Jensen's true nature till the end. I had to re-read after to get all the nuances... Just beautifully plotted and so much emotion put into so few words. My heart hurts.
You know, it's perfect as is, but like folks have said in comments, I really wouldn't hate a verse of this one... ;-)
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Date: 2010-05-23 09:58 am (UTC)You know, it's perfect as is, but like folks have said in comments, I really wouldn't hate a verse of this one... ;-)