I haven't been commenting on the last few chapters, been having some crazy RL stuff, but I have been reading, and this fic is what's been keeping me sane. I know there's humour, and romance, and some very hot smexing scenes, but what I've loved more than anything is the connection between Jared and the kids, the emotional bond they formed, and the whole Joey/Jolene thing. Cutting her hair? I bloodywell cried, woman! Don't do that to me! There's very few fics these days that have the descriptive detail that this does, so that I actually feel like I watched a movie of this rather than just read it (I wish, lol!) but I feel you built a world here, and I was definitely visiting for a while. And I'd love to visit again! Can you hear me now?
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Date: 2010-01-02 05:54 pm (UTC)