What a roller coaster ride. That scene after the jellyfish bite had my heart in my throat. If this is your idea of cheesy fun I can't imagine what serious looks like.
The whole thing was gorgeously written and I really liked Jared's irrational anger at Jen for not getting angry and forcing him to make a different decision.
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Date: 2007-09-15 09:36 am (UTC)If this is your idea of cheesy fun I can't imagine what serious looks like.
The whole thing was gorgeously written and I really liked Jared's irrational anger at Jen for not getting angry and forcing him to make a different decision.