My favorite line: The crinkles around Jensen’s eyes as Jared runs a hand through his short hair and strokes over his cheek with a thumb clearly say, “Stop being such a pussy, Jay, “ but the press of Jen’s cheek into Jared’s palm says, “Please, don’t stop.”
Lovely writing.
And I love that Jensen actually did hear Jared's offhand comment about tying him up. Such a perfect ending!
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Date: 2007-09-15 04:42 am (UTC)My favorite line:
The crinkles around Jensen’s eyes as Jared runs a hand through his short hair and strokes over his cheek with a thumb clearly say, “Stop being such a pussy, Jay, “ but the press of Jen’s cheek into Jared’s palm says, “Please, don’t stop.”
Lovely writing.
And I love that Jensen actually did hear Jared's offhand comment about tying him up. Such a perfect ending!