joints and intercostal spaces between rib bones were prone to sustaining internal burns; burns that were less visible but no less painful than the blackened char mark on his brother’s chest where his necklace charm had arced against his flesh. I had no idea. I'm surprised this hasn't come up in other fics 'cause it seems deserved.
You conveied Dean's weakness well with his inability to stay warm and even digestion exhausting him. And nice balance of humour with the grim reality of their situation. It helped, of course, that I knew how the whole thing ended. ;)
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Date: 2006-10-26 05:34 pm (UTC)I had no idea. I'm surprised this hasn't come up in other fics 'cause it seems deserved.
You conveied Dean's weakness well with his inability to stay warm and even digestion exhausting him. And nice balance of humour with the grim reality of their situation. It helped, of course, that I knew how the whole thing ended. ;)