This is one of those stories where you look at the word count and go never..LOL! It went so quickly ;-)
It was well worth the wait, I'm glad I resisted reading the little bits posted from it, though I can appreciate from your point of view it was probably helping you to keep going.
I had tears when Joey cut her hair! Jensen was love, the kids were adorable and I loved how quirky Jared was really :-)
Really enjoyed this Tracy, thanks!
xx.
I know you said this part isn't beat'd, but the only thing that jumped out at me was this
>> Jared blinks hard, already know "she’s" losing the battle with his emotions, feels the next breath shudder its way down his windpipe as he stretches out one leg then the other, and steps out.
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Date: 2010-01-02 11:01 pm (UTC)It was well worth the wait, I'm glad I resisted reading the little bits posted from it, though I can appreciate from your point of view it was probably helping you to keep going.
I had tears when Joey cut her hair! Jensen was love, the kids were adorable and I loved how quirky Jared was really :-)
Really enjoyed this Tracy, thanks!
xx.
I know you said this part isn't beat'd, but the only thing that jumped out at me was this
>> Jared blinks hard, already know "she’s" losing the battle with his emotions, feels the next breath shudder its way down his windpipe as he stretches out one leg then the other, and steps out.