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ht_murray ([personal profile] ht_murray) wrote2009-03-25 10:35 am
Entry tags:

Balloon Animals, NC-17, JA/JP

Title: Balloon Animals
Author: [livejournal.com profile] tru_faith_lost
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Jensen/Jared
Warnings: m/m sex, rimming, bareback
Summary: Jensen's sore, and Jared's horny. Sleepy morning sex with a little something extra. Absolutely no plot at all.
Words: ~1500
Disclaimer: No money being earned. No defamation of character or any implication of truth intended.
A/N: This was a 5000 words story, but after much hand-wringing and expert advice from [livejournal.com profile] ysbail, [livejournal.com profile] rebekahfair, and [livejournal.com profile] rejeneration, I decided the only thing salvageable was the sex. I'm sorry, ladies, for wasting y'all's time. I've reworked this so much, the mistakes are all mine.



Balloon Animals

Jensen's sleeping late, and for once, Jared is, too. It might have something to do with the way they were both up most of the night, Jensen with muscle spasms from a stunt gone wrong, and Jared with warm hands and heating pad at the ready. He's feeling no pain, now, though, nuzzled into Jared's shoulder, lower legs wound together under the sheets. "Sorry, I kept you up," he whispers.

"Don't be." His hand drifts up Jensen's stomach to the space over his sternum. Soft brush of fingertips on sweat-damp skin, over the most ticklish places along his obliques and in the intercostal spaces. Jensen barely twitches, still loose on muscle relaxers and heavy with sleep. "How do you feel now?"

"Fine...mmm." His hips give a little hitch as Jared's thigh slides over his, and his back doesn't protest, arches and rolls. "Better than fine, actually."

"Was hoping you'd say that." Jared hums and slides closer until his hips meet Jensen's, dip and roll, dip and roll, more stroke than grind. He kisses along Jensen's jaw bone to his mouth, inching along in tiny, prickling increments. His chin's tipped low, each follicle of stubble like the first pinpricks of sensation in a sleep-deadened limb, would be caresses ahead of teasing tongue and stinging teeth. He licks over Jensen's lips until Jensen opens to him and rocks up against the thick muscle of Jared's leg with a ragged moan.

The kiss is slow and sleepy but deep and getting deeper. Jared slides over him, taking most of his weight on his arms, head dipped down between his shoulder blades so as not to break the connection. They grind together, a slow rhythm building. Jensen slips his hands over rippling back muscles, up over shoulders, and then down into the deep hollow where Jared's arched against him, pressing closer. Their cocks thicken in the space between slick, rolling stomachs.

"Is this okay?" Jared tips down just enough to ask, breathing heavy into the space between them. His forehead grazes the bridge of Jensen's nose, his eyes just slow-blinking lashes, lips parted against his chin.

There's only a short moment when Jensen wonders if it really is before he stops thinking altogether and nods, arching back and gasping into Jared's hair as their mouths slip apart.

Jared lifts his hips and licks down Jensen's neck until his nose bumps shoulder. A few seconds to suck and bite along the collarbone while Jensen's finger's spasm to claws, his breathing fast as he digs into Jared's hip bones. But Jared won't be hurried, takes a long breath in like he's testing the scent of Jensen's flushed skin and his spit simmering together like a fine sauce, the way they waft together even when he's very still, then whispers, "Turn over. I wanna see."

Jensen's hips shift up of their own accord, seeking Jared's and he's half over without even trying, Jared's thigh tucked up under his ass to help him roll. He heaves, mouth open, Jared's teeth raking over his collar bone, along the tendon in his neck, and then he's on his stomach as Jared licks down his backbone one vertebra at a time. He can't help but tense up as breath and tongue inch closer to the bruise he knows must be purpling up between his shoulder blades. Jared's arms wrap around his chest, his fingers threading between Jensen's and smoothing the folds of sheet clenched between them until their palms flatten against his pecs. Deft thumbs seek out his nipples, circling and teasing as kisses lave the bruise on his back. He bends like a bow from jaw to navel, feet scrambling in the sheets.

"Jared..."

"Shhhhhh, shh, shhh." The tingle of rapidly cooling breath over sweat and spit. Stutter of Jensen's breath. Slowly, Jared drags their hands up, until they're under the pillow. His fingers untwine and Jensen's head drops down onto the cradle of pillow and forearms, Jared sinking lower down Jensen's back until his teeth tease at the waistband of his boxers. He kisses and licks along the elastic, coaxing Jensen's hips up with fingertips along hipbones before pulling the underwear off, laughing at the way Jensen's feet work against him, constantly churning against the mattress in an attempt to get his hips back down against the mattress. Still smirking, Jared tongues down into the divot over Jensen's tailbone and slides is fingers up, spreading him apart while spit trickles along the widening gap to the tight pucker where it all melts together. Jensen feels himself clenching and unclenching, prodded and soothed from the draft of hot breath and slick of cooling spit.

Jared's head ducks lower, hands forcing Jensen's hips higher, sucking one then the other testicle into his mouth. His tongue undulates, pressure, release, pressure, release against the ridges in his palate.

Jensen grunts and jerks a hand free of the pillow. He tries to grasp himself, but Jared bats him away. Fingers falter and strain, finally snake around and into Jared's hair. Jared responds by sucking harder, switching one side of the scrotum and the other in a random pattern that leaves Jensen panting and shaking, thighs spreading apart in an attempt to get some friction on to his cock. His balls come free with a slurp, and Jared moves up to his ass, alternately kneading and nipping whatever he can get hold of, then kissing away the burn.

By the time Jared licks up his perineum, Jensen's already relaxing and yawning open. Jared stabs in, his tongue thick and wet, and Jensen can't keep his head down on the pillow anymore, bucking up off the bed, and pressing back. He's not going to make it much longer, feels something start to unwind deep in his gut. Fumbling with shaking fingers, he slips the lube and condom out of the drawer and into Jared's hand. He hisses and freezes when Jared clamps down, the grip just this side of painful, then slides the lube out, kissing into Jensen's palm and along each finger.

"Jen... I... I was thinking maybe--" The lube opens, snick and slurp. Jared coats himself first, so it's already warm when he works it into Jensen, one finger then more, Jared's mouth sliding back up his back the way it came, a vertebra at a time until his tongue tickles Jensen's ear lobe. Jensen can tell by the way his Adam's apple's jumping against Jensen's throat that he's trying to say something. Thrumming and impatient, Jensen tries presses back against Jared's cock, then freezes when he realizes the condom's unopened on the bedspread.

"I wanna feel you." Everything freezes but their breath and pounding blood. "Please."

Jensen's chest shakes, long exhale shuddering against his ribs and his heart. They're slick and wrapped up in each other, hyper-aware of the static crackling between them, the only thing that could fit. Jensen nods. "Me, too."

Jared slides in just as slowly as he's done everything else so far, one long thrust all the way in. Then, instead of leaning back and pounding away, he folds inward, one arm around Jensen's chest, the other down across his stomach, fingers curling around his cock. He sets a rhythm more like the ebb of waves along a beach than sex. Long strokes, power and intensity, achingly slow, tender without being soft, aware without being cautious. Harder, longer, deeper, higher. Jared's voice in Jensen's ear, lips at his throat, the tide comes in, building on the crest of every rolling wave, higher and higher, until Jared's stubbled jaw pushes into the crook of Jensen's neck on the leading edge of a muffled grunt. "God!" Lightning strikes and both their heads snap back, gasping together toward the ceiling. "God, nhgh, nghhh, uh, aaaaaahgh."

Exhausted and loose, with every nerve in his body trying to zing out through the ends of his hair, Jensen collapses into Jared, and they fall back, Jared below and Jensen above, just a mess of limbs and sheets and sticky.

Jensen's tucked up close under Jared's arm, sleepy and warm when Jared opens the drawer next to the bed and tosses the unopened condom inside with an embarrassingly large quantity and variety of more. Jared huffs into Jensen's hair, half-laugh, half-sigh and content. "What do we do with all of these?"

In his head, Jensen's floating, Jared's heartbeat the only thing thrumming and solid. He has to hum to himself for a second or two just to make sure he can still make words, and when he speaks he's not sure what will come out. "Make balloon animals."

Jared laughs and pulls them tighter together. "What, like, some kind of porn clown?"

Jensen grins and lets Jared wrap him up. "I hate clowns."

"Yeah, but you love me."

"I do."

The End

[identity profile] sams1ra.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Hi hon,
You know me, this isn't my cup o' tea, but I read the A/N and you made me giggle. I needed that after yesterday, so thanks ^__^

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 03:52 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL. Well, this thing has eaten my lunch for over a week and a half. It was either post the sex or just send it off to the giant recycle bin in the sky.

I have to admit, this was the last thing I expected to see when I clicked to see which entry you were replying to, LOL.

*glomps*

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[identity profile] lisaj67.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG This is beautiful n cute n horny n hot n lovely and i love it, great work .

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[identity profile] wolfine.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 03:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Very sweet & sexy story, I loved it! And of course it reminded me of those Durex commercials on You Tube. Too, too funny!

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, I forgot all about those commercials. Now I so need an icon!

Thank you!

[identity profile] unplugged32.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
This is so sweet and hot and just...**sigh**

xoxoxoxoxo

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! Glad you liked it sweetie. *squish*

[identity profile] sablier-bloque.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, lovey. I'm sorry that the rest of the story didn't work out quite like you hoped, but this is nice! I love the changes you made to the scene, and guh, I love morning sex stories anyways! And the thought of Jared staying up late to take care of Jensen is so, so sweet! Loved this! Bravo. :)

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm kinda sad about the rest of it, too. I really liked a couple of those scenes, but it just didn't work, overall. I do like this, though, so I'm glad you like it.

[identity profile] bjtp.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 03:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww, this is so sweet and lazy and hot, I love it! :D

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

[identity profile] grlmonday.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 04:03 pm (UTC)(link)
As usual, very, very well written!

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey! *glomps* I never guessed you read this stuff. Thank you!

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[identity profile] brunette789.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 04:04 pm (UTC)(link)
This was so beautiful. I love lazy morning sex between the boys, especially when it's so sweet and perfect. The balloon animals line and the I love you was a great way to end it. I love happy boys!

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:39 pm (UTC)(link)
I love them happy, too. Seems half the time I'm writing them angst-ridden and broken, and then I just need to fix it so things like this just happen. Thank you.

[identity profile] kj-svala.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
not the kind of story I read usally. But since it is you who wrote it, I just had to give it a try.

And I like *nods*

The way you wrote Jared taking care of Jensen *loves it* and the getting closer aso, works for me just perfect.

I like, hmmm, the slow pace *?* of the fiction, the way you build it up. Yes.

and the "Make balloon animals." , this left me with a huge grin on my face *g*

does this reply make any sense at all?

anyways, I`m glad I read this, although J2 is not on my "to read" list on a regular base.

Thank you for sharing!

*hugs you*

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Your comment makes perfect sense, sweetie! I'm so tickled you read this just for me. *glomps you* Have fun in L.A.

Thanks!

[identity profile] wendy.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
I love how detailed this is, you paint such pretty and intimate pictures with your words.

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much. I have to make due with intimate pictures until I can get my hands on the real thing. *wishful thinking*

[identity profile] tracevincente.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Very hot and sweet and beautifully written. I kept wondering how the balloon animals were going to figure in, and when I reached that part I lol'd - great title! :)

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha! Actually, the original story was all about how Jared's a balloon and Jensen's the string, and yeah... it didn't work out, so the balloon animals used to make a lot more sense. But I thought it was still a cute way to tie it up. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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[personal profile] chemm80 2009-03-25 04:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Sweet, sleepy morning sex FTW!

I like this little phrase:

...Jared's thigh tucked up under his ass to help him roll.

...the way it's a subtle call back to Jensen's injury and Jared's care and concern. Sweet.

And I have to laugh every time I think of that Durex commercial. It almost embarrasses me; I can only imagine how people who don't wallow around in fandom respond.
Edited 2009-03-25 16:34 (UTC)

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)
I think that's my favorite kind of sex fic, too.

I'm embarrassed to say that I didn't even think of that Durex commercial when I wrote this, even though I laughed my ass off every time I saw it.

It's not really a story, and I swore I'd never write PWP, but I loved this scene too much to delete with the rest. I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you!
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[identity profile] angels3.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 04:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I was wondering where in the hell the Balloon Animals were coming from but I wasn't really giving a shit with all the hot fucking sexing going on.

Holy Shit WOMAN!!!! I have to go to work now. Do you realize I'm not going to be worth anything.

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee! I take it that means you enjoyed it. It's funny. I don't usually write the all-out sex scenes. Usually I'm happy with a tasteful fade to black, but lately I've been getting my porn on, and I have no idea why. I need more stories so I can write more sex, LOL.

I hope you still managed to get a little something done at work.

*glomps you*

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[identity profile] ejayye.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
So, so good! *claps with glee*

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! *blushes*

[identity profile] shattershockred.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 05:08 pm (UTC)(link)
This was adorable......talk about cozy!

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I love cozy. *g*

[identity profile] almightyspaz.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw. I loved this.

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!
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[identity profile] splashpink.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 05:45 pm (UTC)(link)
That was lovely! So cute! Awesome, thank you!

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Schmoopy boy sex makes me happy.

[identity profile] allzugern.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 06:57 pm (UTC)(link)
This was beautifully written. The kind of beautiful use of the English language that makes me go, 'yes! Just like that. Everyone should write just like that.'

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. That's such a lovely comment. Thank you so much.

[identity profile] matalinolukaret.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Mmmm... that was yummy and slow and I loved it. ♥

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. Glad you liked it.
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[identity profile] billysgirl5.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 09:16 pm (UTC)(link)
That was incredibly hot!
Love the lazy morning sex!
Then, of course, I had to laugh my ass off at the end.
Awesome job!

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Yes, it was kinda funny at the end. I have this nagging inability to take things seriously sometimes. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you.

[identity profile] nyoka.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
This is lovely and damn sexy and beautifully written, darling. You had nothing to worry about. *smishes you*

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
That means so much coming from you. (And I'm gonna answer that message as soon as I get caught up on comments, because it's so good to talk to a brain twin sometimes.) Thank you!

[identity profile] sammyndeansgrl1.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 09:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Holy crap that was hot baby!
Loved it!

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] aerwynblue.livejournal.com 2009-03-25 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
"What, like, some kind of porn clown?"

-snerk-Jared's got a new career option.

This was sweet and intimate, very well crafted.
Thanks for posting it :)

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[identity profile] nighean-isis.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:39 am (UTC)(link)
This was a 5000 word story, but after much hand-wringing and expert advice from ysbail, rebekahfair, and rejeneration, I decided the only thing salvageable was the sex. I'm sorry, ladies, for wasting y'all's time.

I think they'll forgive you. I know I would. :D

Warm, loving, sleepy morning sex - there are few things better. And so well-written! Your use of language and pacing is wonderful. Thank you for writing.

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for commenting. I'm pretty sure they do forgive me, but I still feel a little bad about scrapping all that. I'm so glad the final comment was to your liking. *g* Your comment means so much to me.

[identity profile] layne67.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
This is awesome of course, but I wish I've saved the original one ... :)

[identity profile] albeitslowly.livejournal.com 2009-03-26 01:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, sweetie. And for you, I might have the original somewhere...

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