This was a 5000 word story, but after much hand-wringing and expert advice from ysbail, rebekahfair, and rejeneration, I decided the only thing salvageable was the sex. I'm sorry, ladies, for wasting y'all's time.

I think they'll forgive you. I know I would. :D

Warm, loving, sleepy morning sex - there are few things better. And so well-written! Your use of language and pacing is wonderful. Thank you for writing.