came across this fic last night and loved it. i decided i was too sleepy to say anything coherent, but i just re-read and am still all gob-smacked by the fabulousness of the fic so i don't think i'll be coherent now either. (sorry) i really enjoyed the structure of this. often jumping back and forth in time can be confusing, but here it managed to intermittently tighten and loosen the tension. somehow that really works with the humor and angst combo in this piece. by the end of it i feel like i've experienced a little of the winchester lifestyle - there is no divide between the safe and the dangerous, the serious and mockable. there's a lot of scary but it's so well blended with snark and affection that in the end, it's all good. thanks for this marvelous story!
my life
i really enjoyed the structure of this. often jumping back and forth in time can be confusing, but here it managed to intermittently tighten and loosen the tension. somehow that really works with the humor and angst combo in this piece. by the end of it i feel like i've experienced a little of the winchester lifestyle - there is no divide between the safe and the dangerous, the serious and mockable. there's a lot of scary but it's so well blended with snark and affection that in the end, it's all good.
thanks for this marvelous story!