ext_16961 ([identity profile] mini-moue.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ht_murray 2009-12-28 11:49 pm (UTC)

Fantastic job of setting the scene, and introducing the main characters. There's a great mix of humour and pathos in here; Jensen's situation is not to be envied yet his character is so likeable despite the insanity that is his life. I really don't blame him for the revenge he's about to take on Jared. Also the "washing machine arms" line slayed me, lol. I want ALL of this now! *Grabby hands* ;-)

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