Oh this is so coming together now. I got interupted twice while reading this chapter, but it's so easy to fall straight back into it. I even have managed to stop blubbing. :) Still sad but drier eyes now. I can start to think a little clearer now too. I so think the ring is in the guitar. I did whan the wedding cake flavour (hint hint nudge nudge says no more ) lip balm rolled and stopped at it's base. Now ther the thee rattle. It is so in there!!! I will find out I am so wrong inthis next chapter. But hey, is loveing this and having fun guessing too. Oh and how do you think up the little things that they get up to in this. That lip balm thing they do. Goodness, how absolutely heart meltingly fantastic was that!?! and to have Donna, be so, oh that's nice, but hey, forget all that. I've got your life and heart all sewn up for the rest of your life do as mummy says and make you mummy happy.
Oh and going back on myself too. Donna, you made her so hateable, insensitive does not cover it. Bitch might though. (Everytime I think of how she treated her son all I can think is - One Swift Backhander - that'll sort 'er out. From me, not Jensen - that would be wrong. It broke my heart when she plonked the cleaning stuff down the piano. i knew she was going to remove their loving and the J2 and I was praying she wouldn't, like maybe she would get distracted, but the bitch DID. Couldn't she see, is she so blinded by self that she could not see how he almost nothing left and what there was she was exterminating. Heartless BITCH. Like I said - One Swift Backhander!!!
Oh and the dust on the mantle and it being part of Jared. I would feel so selfish over that dust. let no one touch it or remove it or share it with anyone. I'm so glad I am not the only one who see these things, such as the finger prints where a loved one touched something before they died or the dust that lies in the room or all of those little things that make it so much more personal and closer to the one they have lost. I am absolute;y useless at review and I tend to run when I comment, cos I find it hard to express what I mean, But these things have stuck with me all day. You have written this is such a way that it is a story that has embedded itself in my mind and considering I must have read over two thousand fanfics coming on for 3000, I should think this one will stand out. There is not many on that list. Maybe a handful, that stand out above the rest. And honey, I am new here. I have only been reading J2 for about a week and a half. I am have been the Pros Fandom for a good few years, and to be honest, the writing standard there is bloody through the roof, the Pros fandom encourages it. And you my dear, are way up there with the best of them, you really are. I take my hat off to you. Whispers: So no more doubting yourself. You have an amazing talent. If it's fandom wank, then let it get flushed away with the rest of lifes crap. You do what makes 'you' happy. And look at me doing the chat,*rolls eyes at myself* but you know I mean what I have said and I am not one to say this all lightly either. It would sadden me to see you let a talent like this lost or fade because of other peoples issues.[ Oh yes, I always take it too far and over step all the boundries with a grin on my face too - saying there were boundaries here?] right part five, off to read and smile at happy type ending??? please say happy type ending. I need a little happy or as near as - damn it! *g* Okay, shuts up for a bit...lol
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Date: 2008-06-28 08:13 pm (UTC)I even have managed to stop blubbing. :) Still sad but drier eyes now.
I can start to think a little clearer now too. I so think the ring is in the guitar. I did whan the wedding cake flavour (hint hint nudge nudge says no more ) lip balm rolled and stopped at it's base. Now ther the thee rattle. It is so in there!!! I will find out I am so wrong inthis next chapter. But hey, is loveing this and having fun guessing too.
Oh and how do you think up the little things that they get up to in this. That lip balm thing they do. Goodness, how absolutely heart meltingly fantastic was that!?! and to have Donna, be so, oh that's nice, but hey, forget all that. I've got your life and heart all sewn up for the rest of your life do as mummy says and make you mummy happy.
Oh and going back on myself too. Donna, you made her so hateable, insensitive does not cover it. Bitch might though. (Everytime I think of how she treated her son all I can think is - One Swift Backhander - that'll sort 'er out. From me, not Jensen - that would be wrong.
It broke my heart when she plonked the cleaning stuff down the piano. i knew she was going to remove their loving and the J2 and I was praying she wouldn't, like maybe she would get distracted, but the bitch DID. Couldn't she see, is she so blinded by self that she could not see how he almost nothing left and what there was she was exterminating. Heartless BITCH. Like I said - One Swift Backhander!!!
Oh and the dust on the mantle and it being part of Jared. I would feel so selfish over that dust. let no one touch it or remove it or share it with anyone. I'm so glad I am not the only one who see these things, such as the finger prints where a loved one touched something before they died or the dust that lies in the room or all of those little things that make it so much more personal and closer to the one they have lost. I am absolute;y useless at review and I tend to run when I comment, cos I find it hard to express what I mean, But these things have stuck with me all day. You have written this is such a way that it is a story that has embedded itself in my mind and considering I must have read over two thousand fanfics coming on for 3000, I should think this one will stand out. There is not many on that list. Maybe a handful, that stand out above the rest. And honey, I am new here. I have only been reading J2 for about a week and a half. I am have been the Pros Fandom for a good few years, and to be honest, the writing standard there is bloody through the roof, the Pros fandom encourages it. And you my dear, are way up there with the best of them, you really are. I take my hat off to you.
Whispers: So no more doubting yourself. You have an amazing talent. If it's fandom wank, then let it get flushed away with the rest of lifes crap. You do what makes 'you' happy.
And look at me doing the chat,*rolls eyes at myself* but you know I mean what I have said and I am not one to say this all lightly either. It would sadden me to see you let a talent like this lost or fade because of other peoples issues.[ Oh yes, I always take it too far and over step all the boundries with a grin on my face too - saying there were boundaries here?]
right part five, off to read and smile at happy type ending??? please say happy type ending. I need a little happy or as near as - damn it! *g* Okay, shuts up for a bit...lol